Quote Originally Posted by littleindiangirl View Post
I liked it, so far so good! The only thing I will comment on though (if this makes any sense) is the switch back and forth from first person narrator to third person/narrator.... If that makes sense.
Just a bit confusing for me. I'm just not used to first person I guess!! It's late forgive me if I'm just reading it wrong.

Very good though, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
ya i agree that was a bit confusing that and i cant figure out how to say the doctors name lol other than that very good