That is AMAZING!!!! You really put a lot of hard workinto that website! Congrats
You DID say that some typos have been fixed, but I found a few that you may not have noticed:
~The 3rd/4th sentence in the albino page does not make sence to me
~Also on the albino page, in the sentence where you are talking about crosses, there is no predicate. You may want to add something like "...and a few others are really nice" or "my favorites" or something like that.
~I'm sure you saw, on the albino page, you capitalized the "p" in Spider.
~"The Albino Ball Python is a recessive morph. So it has no super form." There should be a comma, not a period separating these sentences.
~"... and if bred to a normal, will come out looking normal..." You may want to say, "all offspring" or "the babies will come out looking normal."
I dont mean to be rude about these typos, I am just trying to help you out with your website. Please don't take this advice offensively, it is merely meant to help
Hope this helps,
Kevin
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