Preview Of The Site

Since i didn't have enough money to hire a professional web site designer, i figured "I have a little talent with Graphic Designing, this couldn't be too hard".... So i decided to open up Iweb (I totally under estimated this Application), and went at it.. After much, thought, researching, etc.. I finally finished my site :) It took me two days... So while i'm waiting for my hosting account to be ready to upload my site, i just couldn't wait to let you guys get a preview of it! So Here is a Screenshot Tour!

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...Picture8-1.png

Heres The Home Page:
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...Picture1-4.png

Heres The Collection Page:
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...Picture2-1.png

You Can Click each Individual Animal And It Will Bring You Up To A Page Like This (There are like two mistakes in the Paragraph Which Were Fixed):
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...Picture3-1.png

We Have Now Clicked The Available Page:
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...Picture4-1.png

We Chose Ball Pythons... When You Click "Here" it brings you straight to an email to me, with the subject "When Are More Ball Pythons Coming?":
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...Picture5-1.png

Heres The Incubator Page... When you Click "Click Here" at the bottom, it brings you to the Available Page..:
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...Picture6-1.png

Then The Contact page is just a regular Contact/About Me Page... You guys can see it when the site is uploaded...

Hope You Like It! And when the site IS uploaded, PLEASE send me any Typos!

Thanks,
Brandon

P.s. Every Thing On The Site is 100% MINE! Nothing borrowed... Another cool thing about the site is the banners.. Notice they are cartoon versions of my reptiles "Sun Glowing"..... The incubator page banner is my favorite... It goes along sooo well with the page.. Its a cartoonified picture of eggs on vermiculite "Sun Glowing".. :)

That is AMAZING!!!! You really put a lot of hard workinto that website! Congrats :)

You DID say that some typos have been fixed, but I found a few that you may not have noticed:

~The 3rd/4th sentence in the albino page does not make sence to me
~Also on the albino page, in the sentence where you are talking about crosses, there is no predicate. You may want to add something like "...and a few others are really nice" or "my favorites" or something like that.
~I'm sure you saw, on the albino page, you capitalized the "p" in Spider.
~"The Albino Ball Python is a recessive morph. So it has no super form." There should be a comma, not a period separating these sentences.
~"... and if bred to a normal, will come out looking normal..." You may want to say, "all offspring" or "the babies will come out looking normal."

I dont mean to be rude about these typos, I am just trying to help you out with your website. Please don't take this advice offensively, it is merely meant to help :)

Hope this helps,

it really looks NICE. i cant wait to check it out!

Looks great!

that is seriously the best looking snake breeder website

Its for sure a start.

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Originally Posted by DarkComeSoon

that is seriously the best looking snake breeder website

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Hahahahaha sorry I just thought that was pretty funny. No offense DBD, it looks cool. :oops:

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Originally Posted by DarkComeSoon

that is seriously the best looking snake breeder website

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Definitely not the best lol as Patrick said, its a start..

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Originally Posted by Hock3ymonk3y

That is AMAZING!!!! You really put a lot of hard workinto that website! Congrats :)

You DID say that some typos have been fixed, but I found a few that you may not have noticed:

~The 3rd/4th sentence in the albino page does not make sence to me
~Also on the albino page, in the sentence where you are talking about crosses, there is no predicate. You may want to add something like "...and a few others are really nice" or "my favorites" or something like that.
~I'm sure you saw, on the albino page, you capitalized the "p" in Spider.
~"The Albino Ball Python is a recessive morph. So it has no super form." There should be a comma, not a period separating these sentences.
~"... and if bred to a normal, will come out looking normal..." You may want to say, "all offspring" or "the babies will come out looking normal."

I dont mean to be rude about these typos, I am just trying to help you out with your website. Please don't take this advice offensively, it is merely meant to help :)

Hope this helps,

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DUDE! Why would there be any offense? Im THANKING you for this lol! Your trying to help me not look like an *** with typos :D Thanks for pointing out the typos.. They have been fixed!

THANKYOU FOR THE HELP!!
~Brandon

Very nice, Brandon! I'm looking forward to visiting your site when it's up and running.

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DUDE! Why would there be any offense? Im THANKING you for this lol! Your trying to help me not look like an *** with typos :D Thanks for pointing out the typos.. They have been fixed!

THANKYOU FOR THE HELP!!
~Brandon

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:D Glad i could help.

You know how some people get all defensive when you point out something that could be fixed. Lol i just put it in there for caution :)

Hi,

Got a few dumb ideas but I don't know how easy hard to impliment they would be. :oops:

Can you add a bevelled edge to the top banners and main content page edge?

How would it look if the top banner extended slightly past the edge of the center content page - possibly with a rounded end piece and slight shadow to make it seem more like a floating layer above both the content (with no shadow) and the background?

How tricky would it be to tone down the harshness of the yellow and add a gradient from the inside edge center to closer simulate a sun behind the content page?

Sort of like a near white yellow radiating down to light yellow.


dr del

Okay. The Site Is UP! www.SunGlowExotics.com

Check it out!

looks good, but the links didnt work

It goes to a google page and says that the link is broken.

The link worked for me... It looks good!

Looks good :gj: Wish i could make my own :(

Idk if someone else already posted this, but the second comma in the second sentence is not correct - at least, it's awkward.

Later, Matt

Now it brings me to a page that says "Forbidden" :/

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Now it brings me to a page that says "Forbidden" :/

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Me too now...