Crazy amazing work, that. As I was reading it, this voice popped into my head - a female with an african-ish accent. I heard raindrops and jungle noises and drums and all. It was crazy. Like something off a children's program. -lol-

I don't think I've ever read a poem that inspired all that nonsense into my head, and I've entered a lot of poetry contests and read a lot of poems. Amazing work. You should consider entering it into a contest. X 1000