actually you did a pretty good job.. I like the muscle structure you have on the forehead and nice deep jowls are nice too. the neck is a bit thick and your lacking forelock and mane but i assume you would add those when painting, the extra lines on the top of its cheek arent nessesary, on a real horse they really arent there.. also the nostrils are flared but thats alright if thats the look your going for, the bone on the bottom of its head (jaw) is very nicely done, looks realistic... well done!yes i agree it is a bit on the boney side