Quote Originally Posted by Ginevive
Here goes. I plan on printing them out at a local shop. I changed names, date and place because there are people out there that 'd rather not know about where/when (nothing against you guys!)

Hey Jen...I like the layout just a few tweaks I would suggest.

A. I would put the names first then the line "Together with their families" you should be the focus
1. The "And" between the names should NOT be capatilized
2. "Marriage" should NOT be capatilized
3. I would add the year after the date (for keepsake purposes)
3.5 The days of the date SHOULD be capatilized
4. "At" should NOT be capatilized
5. Do you need the address of the stables?
6. "fifteenth" SHOULD be capatilized

I am not an expert but from others I have seen and more common ways of writing these changes seem appropriate.

Congrats by the way