Quote Originally Posted by green_man
Nice Jake! I like your poem!


I wrote this one a while ago:

Souls Entwined

I love you so much,
my soul hoplessly entwined with yours
my heart in your hand
my life for you.

I hate you so much,
my dreams tormented by your actions
my heart burned and scarred
my life destroyed.

Please forgive me,
my tresspasses, Ive wronged you time again
I deserve all the pain
my life empty without you.

I love you,
could never say goodbye
could never leave your side
my nightmare
my heaven
my life
Very nice. I already have been thinking about writing another one about one of my ex girlfriends who I really cared about and how she got onto ice and killed the baby. I just need to be in the mood to write.