Need some artsy Advice

[Amy1217]

So, i am having my sweet 16, and i need some advice on the Invitation.
Anybody know how i can improve/edit it?



p.s. dont worry, its not my real address or last name.

Thanks a ton guys!

[jdmls88]

WELL HAPPY soon to be BIRTHDAY and if it was me i would add some color or make the font darker its hard to read, more contrast. OOOH you could add a shadow below the font.

[recycling goddess]

i disagree... having the colour of the font match the colour on the side is nice.

happy soon to be birthday!

[Smulkin]

Or just toss some dropshadow under the font itself to up the contrast.

[JLC]

Yup....just add a little hint of shadow under the font, and it'll be perfect. VERY pretty!

[krood]

ew i don't like that font at all. what if you went for something simple and bold? something along the lines of this