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Re: So I have been doing some thinking..... Suggestions?

Originally Posted by Skyrivers

Does any of it need reworded or eliminated?

I would eliminate all of it: It is written in a Basic, Self-absorbed, and Hostile tone.

I'm sure as a Creative, Intelligent, Positive person that you can do better.

*.* TNTC
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