Thank-yous, thank-yous for everyone!
This is what I was going for:
It's not super important that the "S" comes through, since I wanted it to be subtle and for the snakes to be in a natural position, but I wonder if it would read better if the top snake's tongue was out. As it stands, it looks more like a "J," doesn't it? Good thing my business name isn't set in stone - maybe I can work with that.![]()