Looking for a little feedback

[PitOnTheProwl]

http://www.pitontheprowl.com/

I just published a site through weebly and wanted to get some thoughts on it.
There are a couple pictures not posted that will be fixed this weekend
I did link the site to the banner in my signature here so it is clickable now too

I am not a very "professionable" type of guy and I know a lot a people dont like weebly but as most of you know I am the "down and dirty" type.
I am just looking for something a little easier than just advertising on CL here in SA.

I'm starting to ramble and I need to get ready for work but thanks for looking and any feedback.

[Emilio]

Looks good Man Grats I know you've got to be real happy right now.

[DooLittle]

I don't even know what weebly is, lol. But it looks good, looks like you got all the info needed on there. You say pics will be added?

For me, pics are a must. I hate when people post an ad for a snake and don't include a picture. I don't want to email for a picture and wait, typically I will move on to an ad that has a picture included. My time is valuable too.

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[Chkadii]

I like your site! It's clean and easy to navigate. The only "criticism" I have is the resolution of your main picture is a little low. Overall, well done!

[RoseyReps]

I'm not sure how much weebly let's you alter, but I noticed on the collection page - males the top bar shows the nick-o-bator, yet on every other page it just shows "More..." then hover over it to get to nick-o-bator. I like everything to be consistent, so just letting you know.

I agree with Chkadii about a higher res pic for your banner. Also, I know this may sound silly, but invest in a light tent. A 24" pop-up cube light tent, with 4 back grounds and 2 5000k daylight lights is only around $56 on amazon. (The tent itself is ~$25) It will help not only the lighting, but the consistency of your photo's. All of your snakes on the same / similar back drop is nice. But there is something about the crisp pictures from a light tent that really stands out as professional.

Also, I would take out the bit of "I do not have a contact page because ..." You don't need to explain yourself with that perhaps instead of saying "I do not have a shipping page because..." you could just say "I apologize for the inconvenience, but shipping is not available at this time" Or, if you do plan on shipping (through SYR or what have you) You could still add a page that explains your terms and that you ship through SYR etc. A terms page in general might be a good addition as well. Health guarantee's, sex, whathaveyou.

This bit: "As almost every other breeder out there, I do strive for quality." is a nice bit about breeders, but it makes you seem like you're saying "I'm just like the rest of the breeders". Pat yourself on the back on your own website, you are selling not only your snakes, but yourself as a business. Why should I give you my money if almost every other breeder is equivalent? If you don't think your snakes are better than the rest, why should I? I'm not saying you should put other breeders down, we all know how awesome everyone is, but give yourself some credit! Something like "As a newcomer to the breeding scene, I strive to get and produce the highest quality animals I can find."

Just tossing idea's around for you! Sorry if I seemed nit-picky. Trying to help is all

[DooLittle]

I don't even know what weebly is, lol. But it looks good, looks like you got all the info needed on there. You say pics will be added?

For me, pics are a must. I hate when people post an ad for a snake and don't include a picture. I don't want to email for a picture and wait, typically I will move on to an ad that has a picture included. My time is valuable too.

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Ok, duh, lol. Totally missed the little menu button. Going to really check it out this time...

Edit: Ok, that looks good. Love your second albino girl.

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[Mike41793]

In the first paragraph that "too" should be a "to". I like it, not bad at all!

[PitOnTheProwl]

I'm not sure how much weebly let's you alter, but I noticed on the collection page - males the top bar shows the nick-o-bator, yet on every other page it just shows "More..." then hover over it to get to nick-o-bator. I like everything to be consistent, so just letting you know.

I agree with Chkadii about a higher res pic for your banner. Also, I know this may sound silly, but invest in a light tent. A 24" pop-up cube light tent, with 4 back grounds and 2 5000k daylight lights is only around $56 on amazon. (The tent itself is ~$25) It will help not only the lighting, but the consistency of your photo's. All of your snakes on the same / similar back drop is nice. But there is something about the crisp pictures from a light tent that really stands out as professional.

Also, I would take out the bit of "I do not have a contact page because ..." You don't need to explain yourself with that perhaps instead of saying "I do not have a shipping page because..." you could just say "I apologize for the inconvenience, but shipping is not available at this time" Or, if you do plan on shipping (through SYR or what have you) You could still add a page that explains your terms and that you ship through SYR etc. A terms page in general might be a good addition as well. Health guarantee's, sex, whathaveyou.

This bit: "As almost every other breeder out there, I do strive for quality." is a nice bit about breeders, but it makes you seem like you're saying "I'm just like the rest of the breeders". Pat yourself on the back on your own website, you are selling not only your snakes, but yourself as a business. Why should I give you my money if almost every other breeder is equivalent? If you don't think your snakes are better than the rest, why should I? I'm not saying you should put other breeders down, we all know how awesome everyone is, but give yourself some credit! Something like "As a newcomer to the breeding scene, I strive to get and produce the highest quality animals I can find."

Just tossing idea's around for you! Sorry if I seemed nit-picky. Trying to help is all

You are giving me what I need LOL. I still want to work on that page but I am not one for words. I am working on a light tent but its a project in the making too

I don't even know what weebly is, lol. But it looks good, looks like you got all the info needed on there. You say pics will be added?

For me, pics are a must. I hate when people post an ad for a snake and don't include a picture. I don't want to email for a picture and wait, typically I will move on to an ad that has a picture included. My time is valuable too.

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The ones that dont have a picture showing in my collections are because for some reason I only have pics of them in dirty tubs

Ok, duh, lol. Totally missed the little menu button. Going to really check it out this time...

Edit: Ok, that looks good. Love your second albino girl.

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TY, Ginger is one of the two I hatched. I traded her sister for Butternut

[PitOnTheProwl]

I'm not sure how much weebly let's you alter, but I noticed on the collection page - males the top bar shows the nick-o-bator, yet on every other page it just shows "More..." then hover over it to get to nick-o-bator. I like everything to be consistent, so just letting you know.

Thats got to be on your end, Doesnt do it on my laptop, PC, or phone

[RoseyReps]

hmm funky. I'll try different browsers and pc's and let you know how it comes up.