my business cards

[toyota89]

what do you think?
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[TJ_Burton]

Stick to a white card with black text. It's easier on the eyes and won't require your logo to be in a square box. Overall a much cleaner look. Also, saying you are a rat breeder, and then saying you sell frozen and live asfs is redundant.

Lastly,
I also avoid making false claims (unless you really are the #1 exotics breeder in upstate NY) because they are both tacky, and a quick way to make yourself/your business look too "try hard".

[toyota89]

As far as I know I'm the only or 1 of the few breeders in upstate NY

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[1nstinct]

What do you consider upstate ny? Because I live on Li and I consider anything past the city upstate. And I can almost guarantee there are probably over 100 breeders in "upstate" ny

[toyota89]

Northwest NY, is upstate ny to me. do you have any name of breeders in upstate ny i cant find any.

is this better

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[barbie.dragon]

There's too much text on the business card. Try making it cleaner looking, not too cluttered. I made a very crude sketch on a different format and I'll make a design on a computer when I get home (with your permission to use the picture of the snake.) the snake picture should be behind the text, faded to maybe 50% opacity. White card, dark grey letters except for the front, the font should be black. You don't have to write "we breed blah blah blah" because you are a reptile breeder therefor it's a given you breed reptiles. Again the picture attached is very very crude and I apologize, but it gives you an idea on formatting

[toyota89]

I don't think the new one looks cluttered. But I'm not an expert that's why I'm looking for advice.

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[barbie.dragon]

Here this is a format I was thinking of. Only had a few minutes to design so it's a little rough. There are 2 options for the front, 4 for the back basically. I didn't watermark it but I'm assuming you won't just steal it haha. But if you want to use it I will make a high resolution one later with a watermark for use.

[toyota89]

I like my front but I could change the back.
I could take out the we sell and captive bred parts. Would that make it better?

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[barbie.dragon]

Yeah basically just take the words on the cards I made and put those words only on the card (not necessarily the format). Boas pythons lizards rats&afs. Nothing more or less