Yah I'm focusing more on the writing part of it than fully editing what I have so far. Now I did quickly go through there and fix any typos and that stuff, but not anything serious until I get halfway done. I do know that people can steal your work when you post something online, but thats why I post stuff that isnt fully edited (and why I say that its not as well). And I would love for you to edit my first page, it would be much helpful since my dad said he would edit my work, but he's a teacher and doesnt have the time do it. (: Thanks!