very dissapointed

[Rob]

i agree i am a novice at breeding, and as far as pics go i dont have a light box or great camera, if someone can point me in the right direction to take better pics i would greatly apreciate it. i have a couple of mojave to normal clutches to arrive soon and would like to represent them as best as possible thankyou

It was your giant run on sentence that was the problem. If you want to sell something to someone, you need to come across professional. Proper punctuation and the capitalization of words after a period is a good start. Not a slam, just something you should work on.