I am in no way a good writer I know this so all Im asking for is advice on what to change this is a poem I have been working of for a few hours but I know there are some changes that can be made just want to know how to change them.

Im comfortable at night
happiness will ensue~
with the lack of sight

as you break into a fight
I sit back and watch you
Im comfortable at night

the sun is such a fright
but you do what you do
with the lack of sight

a warning I will bite~
but the closer you drew
Im comfortable at night

I may be filled with spite
but I dont need a view
with the lack of sight

frustration causes you to ignite
this is my only debut~
I am comfortable at night
with the lack of sight

the ones with ~ next to them are the worst lines in the poem if you have suggestions on how to reword them or other words I could use I would love to hear them..this is the first time Im sharing my writing...please be nice Im just a beginner