To be honest in a constructive way, the language could be polished and revised for clarifications and expanding on certain important aspects. (i.e. stuck shed remedy, how much weight is too much to lose in a fast?, how to kill a rat for p/k etc etc...)

Your list at the end about symptoms regarding illness was very loose, and the explanation for mouth rot can't really be combined with scale rot.... not thoroughly discussing and explaining what, why, when and how, for illnesses.

It felt very rough and light on the explanations, but it's a start. I guess I personally felt mentioning every little thing that can go wrong, but not discussing the issue in it's entirety left the text feeling very rushed and informal.

I would recommend reading VPI's book on the care for ball pythons and NERD's book to give more detail to your caresheet. Some of your pointers we're a little vague feeling.

Other than that, I would say you have a very good base to begin with, I would like to see it revised and expanded, you would have a great caresheet.