Quote Originally Posted by Deborah View Post
Looking good however I would go over the content again, some sentences do not make sense, there are also a few mistake in your BP's caresheet.

Here are a few

That's underfeeding I never fed fuzzy mice to any snakes (well not BP)

This is a myth

As for the header I would photoshop the shadow of the BP it looks a bit weird and go over the boa again (if you need help with that you can PM me)
Your the only only to read all of it. I had my wife do a lot of it and I have not went through all of the text yet. Thanks for pointing that out.