Ive been messing around with some poems...tell me what you think.

I Wish
I need to know whats on her mind.
Still I failed to say....
I need to know what makes her smile.
So I can insert something about me.

I need to know her favorite star,
because i'd wish upon it with all my heart.
Wishing someday I could be there....
To share this night with her!

They say wishes are for fools.
Still I'd take my chances,
being a fool with you!

'Cause you're the one I'd Forever wish.



Tell me what you guys think. Took me about an hour for this.