poem i wrote for my english class

[rex322]

what do you guys think?


While I sit here going through all this pain
You seem to think it's all just a game
I lie awake at night and wonder why
What in this world is making me cry?
It sure as hell can't be you
After all the things you put me through.
I still can't get you off my mind
I've never felt any pain of this kind
Now that my emotions feel so dry
I really don't mean to pry
But does it affect you at all?
Does it make you feel tall?
Now as I look back and reflect.
I realize all you are is a defect
Now I've found someone new
I guess you'll just have to make do
This time I'm not coming back
To the feelings to made me lack

[justcage]

**wipes a tear** Awsome stuff!

[rex322]

**wipes a tear** Awsome stuff!

actually, when i read it to my grandma it did make her cry

[normballpython2]

nice*wipes rigt eye* sorry had something in my eye,jk. no seriously great poem

[Jeanne]

Thats AWESOME Rex!

[SatanicIntention]

That is a really good poem. On the same track as some of my poems I wrote a while back. I give it two thumbs up

[rex322]

thanks guys!