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Hoping to get some constructive criticism
Hey folks, my website is still under construction, but I was hoping to get different perspectives on it.
The rat rack plan page has 2 links that don't work because that is as far as I got today before I came home.
I would appreciate any feedback, CONSTRUCTIVE, please.
I had to do it from scratch, I only used Notepad ++ and the W3 website to get it where it is today. I couldn't find any templates that I liked so I had to teach myself how to do it the not so easy way.
Anyway, Please let me know what you think.
http://www.piedpiperexotics.com
Thank you.
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I took a quick look at your website. One thing that I want to mention is your 'about us' page. After reading through it the page makes it sound like you deal with selling rats rather than snakes. I'm not sure if that was what you were planning but you seem to focus to much on the rats.
An 'about us' page should have an overview of everything you do and not just focus on one particular aspect of your business.
I hope you follow what I am trying to say and I hope this is what you mean by constructive.
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I liked it the only complaint i would have is i'm not a fan of white lettering on a black backround it makes my eyes go buggy. other then that though it looked good to me nice work.
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It looks pretty good! I like to know what the facility looks like that I'm getting my animals from. So maybe a page full of pictures of your facility? Just to add to the trust a little. Peple would see the racks and would know you are a serious breeder. Just my 2 cents.
Corns:
0.0.1 Normal; 0.1.0 Amel Motley
1.0.0 Butter Motley; 0.1.0 Charcoal
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The Following User Says Thank You to Andrew21 For This Useful Post:
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Looks good.
The only thing I thought was off was under "Available." You have your logo for the retic selection. I just happened to click on it but I didn't think it was actually a selectable button. I think it would be more clear to use a retic pic for that instead of you logo. I also thought it might be good to place the snake name on each pic for those who are new to snakes or have the name pop up when you place the cursor over it.
KMG
0.1 BP 1.1 Blood Python 1.0 Brazilian Rainbow Boa 1.0 Aru Green Tree Python
0.1 Emerald Tree Boa 0.1 Dumeril Boa 0.1 Carpet Python 0.1 Central American Boa
0.1 Brooks Kingsnake 0.1 Speckled Kingsnake 1.0 Western Hognose
0.1 Blonde Madagascar Hognose 1.0 Columbian Boa
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Good stuff but I would like to see some of your housing for the rats/snakes that way I know where they come from. Overall awesome job, much better then I could do!
0.1.0 Columbian Boa: Nibbles
0.1.0 Ball Python: Cuddles
1.1.0 Pit Bulls: Rosie and Conan
0.0.1 Black Moore Gold Fish: Godzilla
0.0.1 Multi Colored Gold Fish: Multi Cam
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Re: Hoping to get some constructive criticism
I appreciate the feedback. I have incorporated the suggestions. I am NOT a creative person so I have to keep it simple, but any criticism is appreciated.
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The rack plans are a bit confusing / too small to read the numbers
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Re: Hoping to get some constructive criticism
I made the plans bigger so you can see them easier. What do you mean they are confusing?
When I was looking for plans to help me get started I couldn't find much as far as measurements. I tried to spell it out. How would it be easier to read?
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