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    Poetry. Wait What? You do poetry? Yah I know right?

    So I was being bored like usual and found some old poetry I posted on facebook.

    Nows you gets to read it My poetry is written from the heart. I usually free verse it and dont rhyme because I can get more emotion if I free verse.

    All Poetry below is owned by me. Not for free use unless you have my permission.

    Hope you enjoy XD

    The beat goes on.
    By:Joey Davidson


    The pounding in my chest the constant throb that wont rest this is the bass of my heart pounding for you.
    The music is getting louder as the night goes on shaking the floor beneath our feet.
    The tingling vibrations I get in my body everytime I look at you makes me wish this night would never end.
    As the woofers start to shake and the lights start to break all I can do is look into your beautiful eyes and feel the beat pumping in my chest.
    I close my eyes and let the beats flow threw my body, pounding and thumping harder and harder.
    Till I relize that I feel your warm touch and I open my eyes to the most gorgeous girl in the world.
    Smiling back at me, grooving to the beat that is pounding at my ear drums.
    I move in closer so that our bodys touch so that you can feel the bass running in my veins.
    Now we are together as one grooving to the music as the beat goes on.

    Sand beneath our feet
    by Joey davidson


    We lay here together, eye to eye and lips to lips , looking into each others eyes as the sun sets on the horizon, all I see is beauty in it's purest form looking back at me , all mine to take , as we gaze upon each other there is no fear or hate on this earth no poverity or greed no sadness or hate , just me and you ... Together forever

    What’s this?
    By Joey Davidson


    What’s this tingling sensation
    it is the most beautiful creation
    I have never felt this before
    a sensation I could adore
    it’s a sensation I feel when I see you
    a feeling that does not make me blue
    But make me feel warm and energetic
    not sad and sympathetic
    what’s this tingly sensation
    this most beautiful creation
    When we hold hands it gives me a jolt
    as hot as a lightning bolt
    when I look into your eyes
    it’s a sight that could make even an angel cry
    what’s this sensation that brings peace and honor
    To those who even dishonor
    what’s this feeling that comes from above
    It must be love.

    A universe of unending love
    By: Joey Davidson


    My love for you is like the universe,
    its never ending, always growing and it never dies
    when I look into your eyes its like that universe
    opening up and showing me its secrets, every star
    every galaxy, every moon and every planet holding a
    new secret. All there just waiting for me to find them.
    My love for you is like a grain of sand
    that one grain contains more atoms than all the sand in the world.
    If love was a labour I would slave till the end of time just so I can hold your hand
    and feel the jolt of love when our skin touches
    and when we kiss its like the big bang all over again, two people coming together
    to make an explosion of love, passion and
    romance all coming together to make life possible.
    Even though we are not alone in this universe out of all
    living things the only one who can make me feel out of this world is you.
    If there is a number that could define the universe I would multiply it by 2
    and that’s how much I love you.


    So yah there is a few that I have. I am working on a few as we speak.

    Hope you enjoy. I know they are all mushy love crap but someone out there will probably appreciate them so I thought I would share.
    - Joey

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    I hit the home button and was about to get off the computer to write myself until poetry on a snake forum website caught my attention. I also write poetry and enjoy reading others. It's the easiest way to express what's going on inside of my head at times. I enjoyed reading yours thanks for sharing.
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    Oh and also my poetry is usually a grammar nazi nightmare but I dont really like using commas and periods and semi colons while I do my poetry. Just makes it feel more raw.
    - Joey

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    I hate using structure in my poetry.
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    I prefer to save my poetry for truck stop bathroom walls.

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    whose the lucky one who you wrote all these to? I get a serious sense of sexual energy when reading them lol

    I actually hate like 90% of poetry, but liked this. Didnt "feel" like poetry when i read it. cool stuff, nice work!
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    no lucky girl. I just write from that perspective I guess haha. That means alot guys thanks !
    - Joey

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    Re: Poetry. Wait What? You do poetry? Yah I know right?

    Quote Originally Posted by AK907 View Post
    I prefer to save my poetry for truck stop bathroom walls.
    Best line I saw in a truckstop bathroom wall was above the urinal that said " The future is in your hands" I laughed so hard. I am sure thats from a movie but it was hilarious seeing it.
    - Joey

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    Re: Poetry. Wait What? You do poetry? Yah I know right?

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    no lucky girl. I just write from that perspective I guess haha. That means alot guys thanks !
    Be sure to save all of them so when you find one you can woo her with these lol

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    Oh they are saved and actually I have a girl to woo right now haha. she doesnt know about my poetry yet. lol soon though.
    - Joey

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