Requesting Feedback on my Website

Well, I finally managed to buckle down and complete my website... well, complete might be a little premature. More like complete a draft. :P I still have a lot of tweaking to do, but it's finished enough to open up and get a little feedback.

If anything looks a little off, I'd appreciate a screenshot or description. Also, if you have any design suggestions I would be HAPPY to hear them.

Thanks!

Oh... here's the link: www.superiorserpents.com :rolleyes:

Funny I was just taking a look at it......with what you have so far, it looks like you've set a great foundation Lawerence. Congrads!

A links section might be helpful. You could provide a link here and to other helpful herp-related sites.

PS>The symbol of your endeavor is so herp-core.

i loooove your about us page!!!!

i really like the clean look of your site... although sometimes a different coloured background is easier on the eyes. ;)

also... just so you know. a page you have to enter as your index doesn't read well with search engines... so it's better to have your actual page as your index page. ;)

Just curious, but did you breed the animals for sale? That het albino male is tempting me but I can't right now.

xdeus.......I'm sorry to have to be the one to tell you this but...your website is sexy. And I want it.

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Originally Posted by Mendel's Balls

Funny I was just taking a look at it......with what you have so far, it looks like you've set a great foundation Lawerence. Congrads!

A links section might be helpful. You could provide a link here and to other helpful herp-related sites.

PS>The symbol of your endeavor is so herp-core.

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Thanks! I was thinking about a links page as well, but I'm not sure where I want to place it. I don't want to put too many buttons up, so maybe I'll try to fit a link in on the homepage. I'll probaby be hitting you up later for some links because you seem to have a knack for finding some great technical sites.

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Originally Posted by recycling goddess

i loooove your about us page!!!!

i really like the clean look of your site... although sometimes a different coloured background is easier on the eyes. ;)

also... just so you know. a page you have to enter as your index doesn't read well with search engines... so it's better to have your actual page as your index page. ;)

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Thanks for the great suggestions!! BTW, what color background would you suggest? It seems like white and black are the easiest to work with as far as finding contrasting colors. Oh, and I wasn't sure about the initial link to the index page when I made it. You do make a good point about the search engines, so I'll probably delete it. :oops:

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Originally Posted by tmlowe5704

Just curious, but did you breed the animals for sale? That het albino male is tempting me but I can't right now.

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Funny you should mention that one. I bred the Cinny and the normals, but I got that Het. Albino from Adam.

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Originally Posted by WTHbbqSnake

xdeus.......I'm sorry to have to be the one to tell you this but...your website is sexy. And I want it.

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LOL. Thanks! Sexy... can't get better than that. :D

Beautifully done! Easy on the eyes, eye catching, AND easy to navigate! Major thumbs up! :sweeet:

Very nicely done, Lawrence! I likey!

Very very nice!

The text of your terms section, in particular regarding the payment plan options, seems very familiar but I can't recall which site it's reminding me of. This may just be a result of all terms generally amounting to the same thing, or you might have borrowed the text. If the latter you probably ought to rephrase it.

Also, you mis-spelled "Satisfaction" in the guarantee portion.

The layout is clean and easy to navigate, and I love your text images for the various morphs on the "Available" page. Good show.

It looks good. Everything works in firefox so no problems there :)

Nice, clean and foxy! Well done man! :D :rockon:

Good job on your website. I personally like the cleanliness of the design...
Not very noisy website as far as links and stuff, just clean and simple design right to the point. Rock on!

looking forward to see it progress in the future...

Lawrence, very nice job. A classy looking site, yet simple and uncluttered.
Congrats,

Thanks for the feedback!

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Originally Posted by slartibartfast

The text of your terms section, in particular regarding the payment plan options, seems very familiar but I can't recall which site it's reminding me of. This may just be a result of all terms generally amounting to the same thing, or you might have borrowed the text. If the latter you probably ought to rephrase it.

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I didn't actually copy the terms from anyone, but I did get the main points from several sites and massaged them to make my own. Many of them are very similar, so I could see how it could look so familiar. If anyone recognizes something that might be a little too close to their own, I would be happy to change my version.

i like :D very clean and to the point but with a touch of humor (about us section) ;) helps to show you havent gotten to big for your britches :P


i did notice though that most of your photos have your water mark on them (good idea) but the one of the male lemon pastel does not ?

i also think i noticed a type O ... but i wont promise on that one seeings how i am one of the worlds worst spellers

over all :sweeet: :sweeet:

Nice site! It's easy to navigate, has all the info you need, and is easy on the eyes.

Very nice. I especially like your about us page. Pretty creative.

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Originally Posted by Dusty

i did notice though that most of your photos have your water mark on them (good idea) but the one of the male lemon pastel does not ?

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You're right. Just one of the many tasks I have to clean up the site. I have to standardize on my picture borders as well... if I can just figure out the photoshop macros I'll be set. :P BTW, what was the typo you may have found?

And thanks again to everyone that checked out the site and left feedback. :bow: :colbert2:

Nice! I really like it!:rockon:

Site looks great, very nice and neat. The white is a little bright on the eyes though :sunny: Best of Luck :)

i'll pm ya about the background colours... ;)

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I think the gallery page is especially well done. :)


dr del

Very nicely done. Nice and organized easy to move around. Best luck for sucess in the future.

on your care sheet area, this just kind of stood out at me :oops:

• Professional Plastic Cages

Plastic cages designed for reptiles and snakes in particular are a great option for housing your Ball Python. They’re very attractive and are easy to clean. Quite often you can purchase them with a heat source built-in and the plastic is relatively good at insulating so you will save money on heating costs. They will also do quite will with maintaining proper humidity levels. The only downside, however, is that they are much more expensive than the previous two options.

LOL... ok, you can toss an old shoe at me for doin the copy paste thing from your web site.

over all i still like it very much :D

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Originally Posted by Dusty

LOL... ok, you can toss an old shoe at me for doin the copy paste thing from your web site.

over all i still like it very much :D [/left]

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Wow, I'm impressed. I can't believe you read the whole thing and caught that typo. Thanks!! :colbert2: :gj: