Looking for a little feedback

http://www.pitontheprowl.com/

I just published a site through weebly and wanted to get some thoughts on it.
There are a couple pictures not posted that will be fixed this weekend :D
I did link the site to the banner in my signature here so it is clickable now too :cool:

I am not a very "professionable" type of guy and I know a lot a people dont like weebly but as most of you know I am the "down and dirty" type.
I am just looking for something a little easier than just advertising on CL here in SA.

I'm starting to ramble and I need to get ready for work but thanks for looking and any feedback.

Looks good Man Grats I know you've got to be real happy right now.:gj:

I don't even know what weebly is, lol. But it looks good, looks like you got all the info needed on there. You say pics will be added?

For me, pics are a must. I hate when people post an ad for a snake and don't include a picture. I don't want to email for a picture and wait, typically I will move on to an ad that has a picture included. My time is valuable too.

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I like your site! It's clean and easy to navigate. The only "criticism" I have is the resolution of your main picture is a little low. Overall, well done!

I'm not sure how much weebly let's you alter, but I noticed on the collection page - males the top bar shows the nick-o-bator, yet on every other page it just shows "More..." then hover over it to get to nick-o-bator. I like everything to be consistent, so just letting you know.

I agree with Chkadii about a higher res pic for your banner. Also, I know this may sound silly, but invest in a light tent. A 24" pop-up cube light tent, with 4 back grounds and 2 5000k daylight lights is only around $56 on amazon. (The tent itself is ~$25) It will help not only the lighting, but the consistency of your photo's. All of your snakes on the same / similar back drop is nice. But there is something about the crisp pictures from a light tent that really stands out as professional.

Also, I would take out the bit of "I do not have a contact page because ..." You don't need to explain yourself with that :) perhaps instead of saying "I do not have a shipping page because..." you could just say "I apologize for the inconvenience, but shipping is not available at this time" Or, if you do plan on shipping (through SYR or what have you) You could still add a page that explains your terms and that you ship through SYR etc. A terms page in general might be a good addition as well. Health guarantee's, sex, whathaveyou.

This bit: "As almost every other breeder out there, I do strive for quality." is a nice bit about breeders, but it makes you seem like you're saying "I'm just like the rest of the breeders". Pat yourself on the back on your own website, you are selling not only your snakes, but yourself as a business. Why should I give you my money if almost every other breeder is equivalent? If you don't think your snakes are better than the rest, why should I? I'm not saying you should put other breeders down, we all know how awesome everyone is, but give yourself some credit! Something like "As a newcomer to the breeding scene, I strive to get and produce the highest quality animals I can find."

Just tossing idea's around for you! Sorry if I seemed nit-picky. Trying to help is all :)

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Originally Posted by DrDooLittle

I don't even know what weebly is, lol. But it looks good, looks like you got all the info needed on there. You say pics will be added?

For me, pics are a must. I hate when people post an ad for a snake and don't include a picture. I don't want to email for a picture and wait, typically I will move on to an ad that has a picture included. My time is valuable too.

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Ok, duh, lol. Totally missed the little menu button. Going to really check it out this time...

Edit: Ok, that looks good. Love your second albino girl.

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In the first paragraph that "too" should be a "to". I like it, not bad at all! :gj:

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Originally Posted by RoseyReps

I'm not sure how much weebly let's you alter, but I noticed on the collection page - males the top bar shows the nick-o-bator, yet on every other page it just shows "More..." then hover over it to get to nick-o-bator. I like everything to be consistent, so just letting you know.

I agree with Chkadii about a higher res pic for your banner. Also, I know this may sound silly, but invest in a light tent. A 24" pop-up cube light tent, with 4 back grounds and 2 5000k daylight lights is only around $56 on amazon. (The tent itself is ~$25) It will help not only the lighting, but the consistency of your photo's. All of your snakes on the same / similar back drop is nice. But there is something about the crisp pictures from a light tent that really stands out as professional.

Also, I would take out the bit of "I do not have a contact page because ..." You don't need to explain yourself with that :) perhaps instead of saying "I do not have a shipping page because..." you could just say "I apologize for the inconvenience, but shipping is not available at this time" Or, if you do plan on shipping (through SYR or what have you) You could still add a page that explains your terms and that you ship through SYR etc. A terms page in general might be a good addition as well. Health guarantee's, sex, whathaveyou.

This bit: "As almost every other breeder out there, I do strive for quality." is a nice bit about breeders, but it makes you seem like you're saying "I'm just like the rest of the breeders". Pat yourself on the back on your own website, you are selling not only your snakes, but yourself as a business. Why should I give you my money if almost every other breeder is equivalent? If you don't think your snakes are better than the rest, why should I? I'm not saying you should put other breeders down, we all know how awesome everyone is, but give yourself some credit! Something like "As a newcomer to the breeding scene, I strive to get and produce the highest quality animals I can find."

Just tossing idea's around for you! Sorry if I seemed nit-picky. Trying to help is all :)

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You are giving me what I need LOL. I still want to work on that page but I am not one for words. I am working on a light tent but its a project in the making too ;)

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Originally Posted by DrDooLittle

I don't even know what weebly is, lol. But it looks good, looks like you got all the info needed on there. You say pics will be added?

For me, pics are a must. I hate when people post an ad for a snake and don't include a picture. I don't want to email for a picture and wait, typically I will move on to an ad that has a picture included. My time is valuable too.

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The ones that dont have a picture showing in my collections are because for some reason I only have pics of them in dirty tubs :oops:

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Originally Posted by DrDooLittle

Ok, duh, lol. Totally missed the little menu button. Going to really check it out this time...

Edit: Ok, that looks good. Love your second albino girl.

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TY, Ginger is one of the two I hatched. I traded her sister for Butternut:gj:

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Originally Posted by RoseyReps

I'm not sure how much weebly let's you alter, but I noticed on the collection page - males the top bar shows the nick-o-bator, yet on every other page it just shows "More..." then hover over it to get to nick-o-bator. I like everything to be consistent, so just letting you know.

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Thats got to be on your end, Doesnt do it on my laptop, PC, or phone:confusd:

hmm funky. I'll try different browsers and pc's and let you know how it comes up.

On firefox and google chrome on my pc it acts like I stated, on IE it does not. Going to try on hubbies PC as well to verify

Edit: Same deal on his pc. On IE all tabs are consistent, on chrome they end in "More..." with a hover option to nick-o-bator except on the collection - males page.

Funky O_o

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Originally Posted by RoseyReps

On firefox and google chrome on my pc it acts like I stated, on IE it does not. Going to try on hubbies PC as well to verify

Edit: Same deal on his pc. On IE all tabs are consistent, on chrome they end in "More..." with a hover option to nick-o-bator except on the collection - males page.

Funky O_o

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I think I will shorten the collections from males and females to boys and girls;)

Okay, I just changed almost everything. Should fix some peoples issues???
Still want to add more about me.

Looking really nice! I like it a lot! :D

I like it I looked around on my phone a bit everything came in nicely. My question is will you be adding shipping down the line? Just wondering cuz if you are ill be adding it to my favorites list of who to order from in future(I'm in Minnesota so need shipping lol)

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Originally Posted by RoseyReps

Looking really nice! I like it a lot! :D

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Originally Posted by carlson

I like it I looked around on my phone a bit everything came in nicely.

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So all 3 of us like the darker pages better LOL

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Originally Posted by carlson

My question is will you be adding shipping down the line? Just wondering cuz if you are ill be adding it to my favorites list of who to order from in future(I'm in Minnesota so need shipping lol)

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I can always SYR but its a stress I am not ready to handle at this particular time. Though depending on how many eggs are laid this coming year might change my mind :rolleyes:

Haha k then your site will be added to the list lol you make three :) just starting the adding of the collection part. Once tax and student loan money comes in its on my room will be complete with snakes and all so looking at different breeders now.