Please tell me what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dPYW2...e_gdata_player

I wrote and recorded this son earlier today. I am planning on making some changes add another verse and slightly changing part of the second verse lyrics.

Nobody?

I'll bite.

Can't watch Youtube videos at work :-(!

I have my speakers on FULL and I can barely hear you....(laptop)

from what I can hear.....no offence, I wouldn't listen to it. not really my style.

Keep working on it though.

I like it. :gj:

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Originally Posted by 4Ballz

I have my speakers on FULL and I can barely hear you....(laptop)

from what I can hear.....no offence, I wouldn't listen to it. not really my style.

Keep working on it though.

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Sorry for the crappy quality, I used my iPhone to record and thanks for your honesty.

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Originally Posted by ball python 22

I like it. :gj:

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Thanks!!

I couldnt really hear you either bro :/

From what i could hear it sounded like a slightly slower version of a sad tom petty song. (thats not meant as an insult or anything lol). But yea not bad. Definetly not my style, but from what i could hear, still not bad. :gj:

Why does video keep shutting down, I can't get it to play on my phone.....:mad:

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Liked the end part (foriiiive meeeeeee...) and the guitar :rockon:

Oh, there was no video, I could hear the guitar, but barely you. Liked the guitar, bit slow for my taste, but good playing anyhow.

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Originally Posted by Mike41793

I couldnt really hear you either bro :/

From what i could hear it sounded like a slightly slower version of a sad tom petty song. (thats not meant as an insult or anything lol). But yea not bad. Definetly not my style, but from what i could hear, still not bad. :gj:

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Funny you mention Tom Petty, I recorded Mary Jane's Last Dance earlier this week. After I wrote it I thought it sounded a lot like Angus and Julie Stone's Silver Coin.

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Originally Posted by ChrisS

Funny you mention Tom Petty, I recorded Mary Jane's Last Dance earlier this week. After I wrote it I thought it sounded a lot like Angus and Julie Stone's Silver Coin.

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Im psychic!

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And psycho! :D