Re: Hiakus, Let's See Them
The train rolls uphill
slowly heading to Keystone
See you in two hours
Based on my everyday experiance at work.....
..This is my first one ever be gentile.
Re: Hiakus, Let's See Them
You don't understand
The immense torture I feel
Thinking all the time.
Re: Hiakus, Let's See Them
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Fallguy
The train rolls uphill
slowly heading to Keystone
See you in two hours
Based on my everyday experiance at work.....
..This is my first one ever be gentile.
Pops Hiaku Cherry
Gentiles only you know
Choo Choo chugachug
Re: Hiakus, Let's See Them
Ive never written a Haiku before.... ( Maybe in gradeschool?)
lol I had the image of a crow, whos attention was caught. This is what i came up with ^_^
Raven Heeds Alert
Hark Was The Shout Fly He Cried
Smoke Drifts Trees Scream Hark!
Re: Hiakus, Let's See Them
Quote:
Originally Posted by
wilomn
Pops Hiaku Cherry
Gentiles only you know
Choo Choo chugachug
This was meant as good natured fun poking, not as an insult or slight.
Your first effort was a fine one. Keep them coming.
Re: Hiakus, Let's See Them
Quote:
Originally Posted by
mooingtricycle
Ive never written a Haiku before.... ( Maybe in gradeschool?)
lol I had the image of a crow, whos attention was caught. This is what i came up with ^_^
Raven Heeds Alert
Hark Was The Shout Fly He Cried
Smoke Drifts Trees Scream Hark!
Virginity Lost
Poetry Created Thus
Hey, Twice Just Tonight
