Poetry

Ive been messing around with some poems...tell me what you think.

I Wish
I need to know whats on her mind.
Still I failed to say....
I need to know what makes her smile.
So I can insert something about me.

I need to know her favorite star,
because i'd wish upon it with all my heart.
Wishing someday I could be there....
To share this night with her!

They say wishes are for fools.
Still I'd take my chances,
being a fool with you!

'Cause you're the one I'd Forever wish.



Tell me what you guys think. Took me about an hour for this.

sounds good to me.

for that "special someone"? or you just came up with it?

Its for a "special someone" who ive been seeing a couple weeks..known her for like a year though.

I just went thru a bad relationship...i was going to marry this girl as soon as we were both 18, she was expecting my child..we decided it was best for her to abort it...me only being 17 and not ready for a kid, same with her.

We went out for 2 years almost..the all of a sudden all turned to hell and she slept with my best friend.

I also like to write poetry.

I don't usually like to share it.

People may get the idea that I am soft.

:cool:

and I totally am NOT.

;)