please critique my wedding invitation!

Here goes. I plan on printing them out at a local shop. :) I changed names, date and place because there are people out there that 'd rather not know about where/when (nothing against you guys!)

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s...alseinvote.jpg

I think it looks beautiful! I really love the 2 horseshoes on top - great touch.

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Originally Posted by Ginevive

Here goes. I plan on printing them out at a local shop. :) I changed names, date and place because there are people out there that 'd rather not know about where/when (nothing against you guys!)

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s...alseinvote.jpg

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Hey Jen...I like the layout just a few tweaks I would suggest.

A. I would put the names first then the line "Together with their families" you should be the focus
1. The "And" between the names should NOT be capatilized
2. "Marriage" should NOT be capatilized
3. I would add the year after the date (for keepsake purposes)
3.5 The days of the date SHOULD be capatilized
4. "At" should NOT be capatilized
5. Do you need the address of the stables?
6. "fifteenth" SHOULD be capatilized

I am not an expert but from others I have seen and more common ways of writing these changes seem appropriate.

Congrats by the way :)

Hi,


I don't have any advice on the invitation but I had to say the name Diddley-bugel is totally awesome. :bow: :bow:


dr del

I took out the family part, since we are paying for the whole wedding. it was nice sentiment, but like ym sister said, it is better removed.
Thanks!

You're getting married at a Stable? How romantic!!! :D I DO hope you'll share pictures of the day with us! I'm very happy and excited for you and can't wait to see them!


The invitation is beautiful!

Hey thanks for the invite. I'll be there, I hope everyone on this site is going! :D :D

I think you should have changed Mark's name to Squat. Then your name would be Diddley-Squat!!!!