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  • 03-23-2005, 05:23 PM
    rex322
    poem i wrote for my english class
    what do you guys think?


    While I sit here going through all this pain
    You seem to think it's all just a game
    I lie awake at night and wonder why
    What in this world is making me cry?
    It sure as hell can't be you
    After all the things you put me through.
    I still can't get you off my mind
    I've never felt any pain of this kind
    Now that my emotions feel so dry
    I really don't mean to pry
    But does it affect you at all?
    Does it make you feel tall?
    Now as I look back and reflect.
    I realize all you are is a defect
    Now I've found someone new
    I guess you'll just have to make do
    This time I'm not coming back
    To the feelings to made me lack
  • 03-23-2005, 06:21 PM
    justcage
    **wipes a tear** Awsome stuff!
  • 03-23-2005, 06:26 PM
    rex322
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by justcage
    **wipes a tear** Awsome stuff!

    actually, when i read it to my grandma it did make her cry
  • 03-23-2005, 07:36 PM
    normballpython2
    nice*wipes rigt eye* sorry had something in my eye,jk. no seriously great poem ;)
  • 03-23-2005, 07:40 PM
    Jeanne
    Thats AWESOME Rex!
  • 03-23-2005, 07:46 PM
    SatanicIntention
    That is a really good poem. On the same track as some of my poems I wrote a while back. I give it two thumbs up :)
  • 03-23-2005, 08:18 PM
    rex322
    thanks guys!
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