help me with a notice.

hello,

i hope im posting in the right forum.

i want to make a reptile/snake show for my local charity event.

But i need to display a notice, where people can view it before entering the show.
Im not really good in words or i might miss some info.

Here is how it goes.

Enter at your own risk. The animals inside are tame, harmless & non-poisonous.
Even with this minimise risk, these animals are consider still animals. They will still bite (on defense), may excreet waste if startled. In the event of any mishaps, We will not be responsible.

it dont look too good, haha... I seen some pictures of notices being display but i cant fine any at the moment. Help me out here.. thanks.

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Originally Posted by EdShal

hello,

i hope im posting in the right forum.

i want to make a reptile/snake show for my local charity event.

But i need to display a notice, where people can view it before entering the show.
Im not really good in words or i might miss some info.

Here is how it goes.

Enter at your own risk. The animals inside are tame, harmless & non-poisonous.
Even with this minimise risk, these animals are consider still animals. They will still bite (on defense), may excreet waste if startled. In the event of any mishaps, We will not be responsible.

it dont look too good, haha... I seen some pictures of notices being display but i cant fine any at the moment. Help me out here.. thanks.

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I would word it a little differently...

Enter at your own risk, The animals inside are generally docile in nature and non-venomous.
Even with this minimal risk, they have been known to bite in defense if they feel threatened and excreet fluids if startled.
We are not responsible for any mishaps or injuries...

that makes more sense.. hope others have a go at this. you dont have to follow on how i wrote it tho..

Enter at your own risk. The animals inside are generally tame and docile and are non-venomous. Even with this minimal risk, these animals are still considered exotic animals. They may still bite on defense or may excrete wasted when startled. In an event of any mishaps, we will not be held liable.

Enter at your own risk. The animals within are generally docile and harmless, and are non-venomous, but all animals may bite or excrete waste if they feel threatened. By entering, you accept that such mishaps may occur, and we are not liable for them.