Wrote a new song!

[Reptiliteer]

Hey guys, I just wrote a new song and I need some unbiased opinion. Be nice because it was recorded using a computer mic and a free recording program. I am an aspiring musician but the quality of the song is extremely unprofessional. Just trying to get some feedback before I put the massive amount of time it takes to actually record something like this.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QFalqmLEw40

[Reptiliteer]

Youtube cut off the first few seconds for some reason so it just starts in without the intro but you didn't miss much.

[GirDance]

I think it could be a good start... I'm not going to pretend to be an expert by any means, but with a little work on the structure (adding a more obvious bridge, and possibly a solo - which in my opinion modern music has forgotten the value of a good guitar solo) you could be on to something.