It looks good as a start. I don't mean to be a nitpicky so please take this as constructive criticism:
1) the newspaper substrate. Not a big deal, I use it too but for a professional breeder/business perspective/photographs meant to entice people to look at/consider/purchase your animals, especially in photographs, it looks "busy" and a tad sloppy. Maybe just paper towel or even a different background to really highlight the colors on the animal(s) you're photographing?
2) What is your page for? To display your animals as an interest, a hobby, an information page, a sale page for your business or...? It's hard to tell what you're about from viewing your page. There's nothing that says "Hey!, I breed and sell ball pythons and here's what I'm all about! Check out my available page, here's my collection and here's my pertinent info, to include that I hate sand fleas so no long walks on the beach, I have been in this industry for _________ duration of time, my intent and promise as a breeder/seller is to: ___________..." or whatever, lol!
3) You take nice quality photos but again, what are you showcasing? Just showing off your animals or are they available or...? It's just hard to know what you're offering/where you're going with what's posted.
It's a great start and you have some absolutely stunning animals and an awesome collection. Again, this isn't meant to offend or be rude and I really hope I don't come across like that. Tone is extremely hard to convey via computer/written text so please let me know if I completely inserted my foot in mouth. Good luck and look forward to seeing what you have available if you start selling. Take care!
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