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Poets Here? Show your stuff
I recently got into poetry a bit. We are working on an assignment for drama and I have decided I really like writing poetry. I think of it as a good way to get whats bothering you off your chest without sounding whiney.
Heres my latest that dicusses the main stereotypes we hear of at school that I call Who am I? What inspired me to write this was all the stereotypes I have heard and all the groups people are classified into.
Leave your feedback and post your own work with a little inspiration about it.
Who am I?
Skinny or Fat
White or Black
What does that matter, any more than how I act?
He must be this, He must be that
I only say this because of how he acts
Is he emo or maybe prep? Maybe hes neither, maybe just ghetto
Must not be emo, he aint depressed
Is he over Dressed?
Oh that could only be
He's a prep
Wait that’s not Ralph Lauren I see
So that leaves ghetto, ya that must be me
But wait why can’t I just be me?
I’m me nothing else
Can’t you see?
]I don’t like being classified as neither one of these
That just leaves me
Ya that’s right
I’m only me!!!!
~Jake~
Too many boas to list and a few balls as well
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
Nice Jake! I like your poem!
I wrote this one a while ago:
Souls Entwined
I love you so much, my soul hoplessly entwined with yours my heart in your hand my life for you.
I hate you so much, my dreams tormented by your actions my heart burned and scarred my life destroyed.
Please forgive me, my tresspasses, Ive wronged you time again I deserve all the pain my life empty without you.
I love you, could never say goodbye could never leave your side my nightmare my heaven my life
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
Originally Posted by green_man
Nice Jake! I like your poem!
I wrote this one a while ago:
Souls Entwined
I love you so much, my soul hoplessly entwined with yours my heart in your hand my life for you.
I hate you so much, my dreams tormented by your actions my heart burned and scarred my life destroyed.
Please forgive me, my tresspasses, Ive wronged you time again I deserve all the pain my life empty without you.
I love you, could never say goodbye could never leave your side my nightmare my heaven my life
Very nice. I already have been thinking about writing another one about one of my ex girlfriends who I really cared about and how she got onto ice and killed the baby. I just need to be in the mood to write.
~Jake~
Too many boas to list and a few balls as well
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
i have a feeling no one here would be very impressed by my poetry. it's a little... goofy. i used to write serious poetry, but not so much anymore.
- Emily
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
I'm not poetic sorry.. (
When you've got 10,000 people trying to do the same thing, why would you want to be number 10,001? ~ Mark Cuban "for the discerning collector"
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
Originally Posted by mlededee
i have a feeling no one here would be very impressed by my poetry. it's a little... goofy. i used to write serious poetry, but not so much anymore.
Someone is sure to enjoy it. I'd read it if you posted it!!
Originally Posted by Freakie_frog
I'm not poetic sorry.. (
Thats what I used to say and then I gave it a try.
~Jake~
Too many boas to list and a few balls as well
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
i was a bit poetic last year trying to "court" different girls at my ex high school.of course things never went my way.
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
Originally Posted by Pork Chops N' Corn Bread
Thats what I used to say and then I gave it a try.
Ok hows this..
Oh no its time to go.
When you've got 10,000 people trying to do the same thing, why would you want to be number 10,001? ~ Mark Cuban "for the discerning collector"
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I wrote poetry ages ago. Most of it was dumb, but there were a few I was proud of. No idea where they all are right now, as we've moved so many times. This one though, is the only one I ever memorized and is probably my favorite as well...so I can share it.
It doesn't have a title.
~*~
Concentrated masses of power ahead,
Underneath them a feeling of fear and of dread.
Masters of all the sky and the weather,
Under no bound of harness or tether.
Lo! And behold the mightiest thunder!
Over the ground they pillage and plunder.
Never relenting to sun or to moon,
Incasing the world in their silver cacoon.
Moving ahead over the earth and the sea,
Billowing up into that which they be,
Unleashing the power held deep inside
Sending forth torrents...and no one can hide.
~*~
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Re: Poets Here? Show your stuff
Originally Posted by Pork Chops N' Corn Bread
Very nice. I already have been thinking about writing another one about one of my ex girlfriends who I really cared about and how she got onto ice and killed the baby. I just need to be in the mood to write.
She was pregnant?
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