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    River Bend Reptiles New Website.

    I just finished this website for River Bend Reptiles. They have their own line of cages that are great. They are supper light weight and easy to maintain. Im trying to convince them to ship their cages. Im sure if they get enough people asking about it they will.

    Check out the site ant let me know what you think.
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    I would work the language in the home page a little bit. There is a grammatical error in the second sentence (ran versus run) and the rest of the paragraph seems a little stiff. I like the design and the feel of the site. I really like the pic at the top of the header on each page. Very nice.

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    Re: River Bend Reptiles New Website.

    Quote Originally Posted by Don View Post
    I would work the language in the home page a little bit. There is a grammatical error in the second sentence (ran versus run) and the rest of the paragraph seems a little stiff. I like the design and the feel of the site. I really like the pic at the top of the header on each page. Very nice.
    Agree with everything you pointed out. Looks great, but the intro is a bit choppy...some sentences seem out of place or just don't flow well...i.e. "We owned a pet store in the 80ís in California."
    Lucifer Sam, Siam cat...
    Always sitting by your side,
    Always by your side...
    That cat's something I can't explain...

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    Thank you. I'm trying to get better and more informative content.

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